My character’s names often change as a novel develops. Sometimes the original name just doesn’t seem to suit the way the character or their backstory develops.
There’s a theory called nominative determinism which speculates that your given name might define what you do in life. I don’t subscribe to that theory, but names do need to fit the characters.
I used the name Marcus in a novel recently, but you have to resolve the possessive suffix, either Marcus’ or Marcus’s. I would instinctively go for the former, but apparently this is a contentious point. I resolved it by changing his name to Martin.
Has anyone else experienced this problem?
For my current novel in progress all the characters have been given names from the Old Testament – no idea why, but it appears to be working and it feels ‘right’ for the story – for me at least.
They are Ethan, Abby (Abigail), Hannah, Isaac, Martha, Beth (Bethany), Daniel, Simon, Peter and Mary.
In my head there’s a connection between my novel, set 100 years in the future, and names from over 2000 years ago.
Does anyone have a better way of choosing character names?
My first novel was planned meticulously I had no idea how ‘real’ authors developed their plots. Previously I had tried to write a novel with very little planning and my plot got confused, I got confused – even the characters in my novel got confused. So I set about working out everything beforehand.
Here is my nerdy, old-fashioned, personalised method of plotting. You will need… Hundreds of small bits of cardboard Two coloured felt-tip markers (blue edge on a card for a chapter head and date, red for a chapter summary) A pen of your choice that doesn’t smudge easily A roll of clear sellotape A cup of tea (coffee is an acceptable alternative) Patience
The advantages of this method (which I still use in a modified form) You only need to know three or four things in your plot, scribble them on bits of card and put them on your table.
You don’t have to imagine a whole plot in one go. Once you’ve started you can move them around, add ideas, even push some to the side. Before you know it the story will grow in front of you. Sellotape them together before the wind blows them all over the floor (it happened to me once).
Don’t let it rule you In my work process this is produced as a guide only. Once I start writing everything changes. But you can just cut up your bits of card and replace them with new strands and characters as they appear. You can see my scribbled character spider in the top left of the picture.
Software options There are software programs that emulate this method and probably give you more options, but… 1) I don’t have a computer screen as big as my table. 2) Getting away from the screen can liberate your imagination – it’s a touchy-feely method.
Spoiler alert This character spider contains facts about characters in my second novel The Act of Falling that don’t appear in the text. If you know anything about personality disorders you would probably work them out anyway, but just thought I’d mention that.
The size of the circle My focus is on Emily Hamton, therefore she takes centre stage in this diagram. However, the novel is written from the POV of Richard. The size of each circle is roughly the prominence of a character in the text. There are three circle sizes, therefore primary, secondary and bit part players.
My nerdy approach to plot and character I usually have a broad idea of the plot and theme of the novel – although I’m personally not so concerned with the theme as it seems a bit like lecturing to your readers.
The plot develops intricacies as I write. I keep that under control in another way, which I will post here soon. The characters also develop and this graphic helps me to keep the salient points of their relationships and history consistent.